雅思寫作：字?jǐn)?shù)不夠 我來給你湊
來源：環(huán)球 教育
小編：Ruth 334字?jǐn)?shù)，是雅思寫作的一個(gè)硬標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，很多中國考生都頭痛不知道該說些什么，導(dǎo)致字?jǐn)?shù)不夠被扣分。通常雅思的小作文要求不少于150個(gè)字，大作文不少于250個(gè)字，小作文湊字?jǐn)?shù)很容易，在細(xì)節(jié)方面多描述一些，數(shù)據(jù)多提一些，分分鐘搞定。而大作文可能相對(duì)難一些。字?jǐn)?shù)不夠?環(huán)球小編幫你湊，現(xiàn)在集中注意力看下邊：
方法一：深入分析——Analyze Deeply。很多時(shí)候，字?jǐn)?shù)不夠是因?yàn)闊o話可說，無話可說是因?yàn)橛^點(diǎn)很少甚至沒有觀點(diǎn)。其實(shí)，我們并不需要太多的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行深入分析，也可以有很豐富的寫法。任何一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)都是可以分出層次的。只要我們能夠分出一二三點(diǎn)來，一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)就可以裂解為多個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)寫幾句，字?jǐn)?shù)就會(huì)有顯著上升。當(dāng)然，在分割觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候要注意前后的邏輯關(guān)系和界限，不要把幾個(gè)觀點(diǎn)混淆起來。
方法二：多個(gè)方面——Think in different aspects。很多時(shí)候同一件事情從不同的方面說就有不同的觀點(diǎn)。例如限制購買車輛，單獨(dú)寫出來是一件很簡單的事情，也不需要很多字?jǐn)?shù);但是，如果從政府、上班族、汽車生產(chǎn)者、汽車銷售商等多個(gè)角度去考慮和落筆，文章就豐富了，字?jǐn)?shù)也上去了。
方法三：正說反說——Divide into two sides。一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，乃至一件事情，不論如何肯定都有正反兩個(gè)方面。這一方面是說一個(gè)事情肯定有利有弊，另一方面是說人們的態(tài)度也有支持和反對(duì)兩種。在寫作文的時(shí)候，如果能夠注意支持一面的同時(shí)，對(duì)立場相左的一方予以分析并進(jìn)行反駁，則文章內(nèi)容更加豐富，邏輯更加完整，字?jǐn)?shù)也不用擔(dān)心。
最后，還有一個(gè)不是方法的方法，就是注意總結(jié)，很多烤鴨在寫最后的結(jié)論段的時(shí)候以為就是走個(gè)形式，空喊一下就完成。其實(shí)，總結(jié)段是應(yīng)該回顧整個(gè)文章，然后強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀點(diǎn)的。在回顧整個(gè)文章的時(shí)候，要比主體段更簡略，更有側(cè)重，更加精煉。如果重視起總結(jié)的內(nèi)容，文章不論從完整程度上還是字?jǐn)?shù)上都會(huì)因此受益。
在此為加大家?guī)?strong>范文一篇，一起學(xué)習(xí)啦～～
Topic
You recently met a manager from a new company that opened in your town. After the meeting, he wrote to you, offering you a job in this new company. However, you want to stay in your present job. Write a letter to the manager, and include: thanks him for the offer, explain why you want to stay in the present job, recommend a friend to take the job in the new company.
Rewritten Sample writing:
My sincere apologies for the delay in my response, as I wished to consider your offer in detail.
First, I wish to express my gratitude for your generous offer, which was important to me, nevertheless after consideration I believe that I would prefer to stay in my current position.
As a structural engineer, the design of economical residential buildings to accommodate general people was a dream of my childhood, and presently I am very fortunate that I am able to fulfill my dreams. As a result, it would be my intention to remain with my present work.
At the same time, and this may be of interest to you, I would like to recommend a friend, Bob Gillett, who was a colleague of mine, to apply for the position that you offered me. He is specialized in environmental engineering and has ten years’ working experience. I believe he would be the perfect candidate for your company. I have also spoken with him in brief and you can contact him directly on 0432783157. I am sure he would be pleased to hear from you.
Thank you once more for your kind consideration and with best wishes.
